Thomas McMullan, The Last Good Man,
Bloomsbury, 2020.
Duncan Peck has
travelled alone to Dartmoor in search of his cousin. He has come from
the city, where the fires are always burning.
In his cousin's
village, Peck finds a place with tea rooms and barley fields, a
church and a schoolhouse. Out here, the people live an honest life –
and if there's any trouble, they have a way to settle it. They sit in
the shadow of a vast wall, inscribed with strange messages. Anyone
can write on the wall, anonymously, about their neighbours, about any
wrongdoing that might hurt the community. Then comes the reckoning.
The stranger from
the city causes a stir. He has not been there long before the village
wakes up to the most unspeakable accusation; sentences daubed on the
wall that will detonate the darkest of secrets.
A troubling, uncanny
book about fear and atonement, responsibility and justice, and the
violence of writing in public spaces, The Last Good Man dares to ask:
what hope can we place in words once extinction is in the air?
“A Scarlet Letter
for our times ... Zamyatin's We meets Lord of the Flies meets de
Tocqueville meets cancel culture meets spite and malice meets Jesus.
Should words be power? Justice or mercy? What price rage?” –
MARGARET ATWOOD
“This is a
visceral and disquieting debut novel about the power of words, and
should be read by anyone who uses the internet” – New Statesman
“McMullan makes
highly effective use of the rugged landscape, full of unease and
portents, in his creepily unsettling debut, a timely tale about the
dangers of toxic rhetoric and mob rule” – Daily Mail
“A brilliantly
unsettling parable about how we police our societies through
violence, language and shame” – independent.co.uk
“Innovative and
timeless” – Irish Times
“An extraordinary
and disquieting work of imagination, and as original as any novel
I've read in recent memory ... The Last Good Man makes visible the
dark matter of our troubled zeitgeist, and the cruelty that animates
moral community” – ROB DOYLE,
“A clean,
crackling novel ... McMullan updates Nathaniel Hawthorne's The
Scarlet Letter to today's sanctimonious climate ... An arresting
debut about medieval justice that has plenty to say about the dangers
of moral puritanism” – Metro
“An earthy,
gripping piece ... A serious and seriously good book” – NB
Magazine
“McMullan's skill
truly lies in his prose…a startling and evocative tale” – Set
the Tape
“An unsettling and
startling work of literary imagination ... A shocking but compulsive
read” – ON Magazine
“Brilliantly
eerie” – Dystopia Junkie
“Eerie and
atmospheric” – Sunday Post
“An essential and
commanding slice of folk horror - a wholly successful exercise in
world-building that straddles an uncomfortable line between reality
and fantasy” – Lunate
This is a dark,
compelling novel about the only two things humans really have to
fear: each other, and being alone. We are apex predators: if another
creature kills you, it will usually be one of your own kind. But your
own kind can hardly be avoided. A life outside society – no aid, no
warmth, no walls, no one to share the labours of survival with –
will be a short and unpleasant one. This irreconcilable need and
repulsion explains how we come to find Duncan Peck at the start of
this novel, an outsider in the mists of Dartmoor, running from people
who terrify him, and towards people who might not be much better.
The Last Good Man
seems to be set in the near future. Ecological collapse is hinted at;
social collapse is explicit. Peck has fled an unnamed city, a place
of fire and violence where people eke out existence on a dwindling
supply of tinned food. Life there is an act of constant vigilance:
“In his final few days in the city, he had been a pair of eyes and
little else, watching the struggles of his few remaining neighbours
from behind a window.” All his hopes now lie in a nameless village,
to which he has been invited by his cousin James Hale. Hale’s
letter promised a new home of unimaginable plenty, but on first
approach it looks a lot like another fiefdom of nightmares.
The set-piece
opening is vividly nasty, recalling the smack-in-the-face technique
of early Ian McEwan, and so accomplished that it’s easy to forget
this is a debut. Peck creeps up, unseen, on “a black mark that
becomes a body in the bog” – a man, who has been chased down by
20 men and women dressed in raincoats and armed with metal poles, and
with Peck’s cousin leading the pack. Despite this recognition, Peck
hangs back, assuring himself it has nothing to do with him: “You
are blameless, he tells himself. You are good.” The man is hauled
out against his protests, put in a wheelbarrow and pushed back to the
village.
When Peck makes his
appearance in the village shortly after, he learns that what he saw
on the moor was the village’s justice system in action. Offenders
are put in the stocks, or have a limb smashed publicly; others are
“burdened”, meaning they are strapped to heavy objects (a
nightstand, a wardrobe) and forced to carry them for the duration of
their sentence. The accused can choose to turn themselves in, but the
nature of the punishments means most make a run for it, like the man
Peck watched as he arrived; and in any case, it’s more satisfying
when there’s a hunt.
Even more intriguing
is how the offenders are identified. There are no police in the
village, no judiciary, no way to contest the truth or defend
yourself. Instead, there is the wall, standing outside the village.
Lower down, it’s covered with notices about items available to
share (there’s no money in the village: everything is given freely,
so long as you are “good”) or events scheduled. The upper levels,
though, are a scrawl of unsigned accusations: “GEOFF SHARPE DOESN’T
CUT THE MEAT GOOD. I SAW GEOFF SHARPE STEALING SLIVERS. NOBODY LIKES
GEOFF SHARPE. I HOPE GEOFF SHARPE DIES.”
One mention on the
wall can be got away with. Two will probably be fine. More than that,
and something will have to be done. (And if that sounds a bit like
Twitter, it’s surely deliberate. The internet doesn’t exist in
the novel, but it’s nonetheless one of the best portrayals I’ve
read of the dynamics of online mobs.) The wall decides the truth of
the village: “If we can’t trust in people and words,” Hale
explains, “there’s no point in living with people and words.”
When Peck first sees the wall, it strikes him as both a “cleaver”
and an “anchor”, savagery and security in one.
That slipperiness is
at the heart of the novel. Peck first approaches the village through
the mist, and his view remains obscure, uncertain. The wall is
monstrous; but then, the only alternatives to the village seem to be
“farmhouses populated by old bones and communities of agony by the
old motorway”, so perhaps its monstrosity is necessary. Peck wants
to be “good” by his own lights, not to fall under the sway of the
village’s alarming moral code, maybe even to become a reformer; but
the village requires him to be “good” on its own terms if he is
to live there. Despite his intentions, the wall pulls him in.
The spiralling
demands of justice in the village make for gripping storytelling, and
McMullan has a sureness with violence that puts him in the company of
Sarah Moss and Benjamin Myers (or the film director Ben Wheatley, who
would ace an adaptation of this). Weaknesses show up in the more
loosely written flashbacks to Peck’s time in the city, while a firm
grasp on the levers of social psychology doesn’t quite make up for
a general flimsiness of characterisation. Even so, The Last Good Man
is viciously captivating: frightening to be around, impossible to put
aside – a bit like other humans, in fact. - Sarah Ditum
https://www.theguardian.com/books/2020/dec/12/the-last-good-man-by-thomas-mcmullan-review-a-viciously-captivating-debut
“If you can’t
trust in words, what can you trust in?”—this question, asked but
never answered, echoes through Thomas McMullan’s debut novel, The
Last Good Man. In it, language carries a price; it exacts heavy cost.
Words are spent freely—and parsimoniously weighed and measured.
They punish, reward and disguise. They reveal truths and spin
falsehoods. They are judge and jury. They break bones.
Our hero is Duncan
Peck. There has been some kind of ecological catastrophe—slow-burning
and terminal. Food is rationed, and there are too many hungry mouths.
Law and order is arbitrary and haphazard. We meet Peck on the opening
pages, becalmed in a soaking winter mist on Dartmoor, a remote
expanse of rugged ground in south-west England. Peck is fleeing the
city where everywhere “there is the smell of death”. He has come
to meet his childhood companion, James Hale, who vanished three
years’ before. Out of nowhere, Hale has sent a letter inviting
Peck to a village—never named—hidden away on Dartmoor. At first,
it seems a kind of Shangri-La: refuge from the gradual contraction of
the world outside. There is a teashop, a school and a church; pig
pens, chickens, and stores of crops: food. But most of all, for the
lonely Peck, worn threadbare and ghostly by the ducking and diving of
city living, there is community:
The pang of food
hangs above the heads of men, women and children jostling. The smell
of wet earth is masked with the rich scent of pastry and a loaf of
barley bread is broken into handfuls, given out in baskets to those
that want a taste.
The village has a
ghastly open secret, though: a vast wall, massive on the skyline
above the village. Its “angular jut … is unmistakable. Taken
against the moorland it looks so unnatural, so much of a statement
and yet small compared to the blankness all around.” On the wall is
pasted the usual parish council bumf: missing cats, choir meetings
and after-school clubs. But above these notices, it holds accusations
too: scrawled huge, anonymous and unarguable: “I KNOW ALL ABOUT
ANNA MOAR AND SCOTT DOYLE AND IT IS DISGUSTING WHAT THEY ARE DOING.
SCOTT DOYLE IS A FUCKER. ANNA MOAR IS A WHORE.”
The village turns on
the spike of these accusations. Those found guilty are burdened with
furniture. Tables, chest of drawers, chairs and hall mirrors are
strapped to them—a punishment both barbaric and absurd. Find your
name on the wall repeatedly, though, and the reckoning is more
baroque. The accused are strapped to scaffolding on the village
green, their limbs smashed with metal clubs. They are placed in
stocks and pelted with rotten vegetables. People who try to escape
are hunted down by bands of their neighbours, called chasers. The
town has its own quasi-sheriff who organises this hue and cry. When
Peck arrives, his old friend, James Hale, is in this role.
McMullan has crafted
an impressively taut, thoughtful novel from these exuberant
materials. He writes with a muscular lyricism; the book’s moral
gaze is both pitiless and ambivalent. The idea for the village’s
great wall came to McMullan, a journalist, when he was teaching in
rural China. In one small village, he found a building scrawled with
the misdeeds of the community: a palimpsest of slights and sins. It
was a relic of Mao’s Cultural Revolution, a communal purging of
bourgeois sentiment. McMullan’s usually voluble guide fell quiet in
its shadow; silenced by this singular carnival of accusation. This
extraordinary encounter surfaces obliquely in The Last Good Man. By
distancing his novel in time and space, McMullan gives himself
thinking room to navigate the deeper resonances of this artefact—how
do we trust what is said or written? Why is language less fickle than
the human heart? Is community anything more than a shared fiction:
brittle and all-too-easily co-opted?
The Last Good Man
gives no easy answers. A note of cool, sustained ambiguity runs
through the narrative, right up to its quiet fade-out of its ending.
McMullan makes no bones of his literary influences: the blood-soaked
spectre of mid-career Cormac McCarthy—Child of God, Blood Meridian
—haunts the grandeur of the landscape descriptions, and the sudden
flashes of brutish violence which punctuate the narrative; the stolid
bulk of Margaret Atwood’s The Handmaid’s Tale is unavoidable in
the post-apocalyptic setting and the festivals of communal
denunciation and retribution.
But he tips his hat
to more unexpected antecedents, too. Most chapters start with a fresh
set of accusations daubed on the wall. They appear, in different type
and font, before the main bulk of the story. It’s a potent device,
lending a dizzying breathlessness to the action. “Things have been
getting worse,” characters frequently remark to each other as
charge is daubed on charge, and calls for revenge grow louder and
more violent. This nesting of motives and accusations, and the plot’s
relentless percussive beat, calls to mind the pacing and murky
morality of Raymond Chandler’s detective fiction. Yet just beneath
these accusations, McMullan contrasts quiet, sparsely beautiful
descriptions of village life:
The paint is still
wet on the wall; a cardinal dew facing the village as mist hangs over
the fields. A sonorous void. The light is new born, it ignites the
land in all its contours. A lone cow counts the perimeter of its
enclosure. The pigs are burning in their dreams.
I can’t be alone
in hearing echoes of Dylan Thomas’s ‘Under Milkwood’ here. The
shushing, slapping rhythms of “still wet on the wall” recall
Thomas’s famous opening lines: “sloeblack, slow, black,
crowblack, fishingboatbobbingsea”. Jon McGregor’s Reservoir 13 is
another parallel. In that novel, as in Last Good Man, no distinction
is made between human and non-human life; the comings and goings of
both receive the same equal and exacting attention. Human darkness—in
McGregor, the disappearance of a young girl; in McMullan, murder,
betrayal and corporal punishment—is simultaneously shadowed in, and
overshadowed by, the inscrutable turning of the natural world.
Late in Last Good
Man, two characters dispose of a flensed pony carcass in a bog, “its
mane fann[ing] out across the famished ground”. The saturated soil
swiftly vanishes their evidence: “The bog has swallowed the remains
of the pony, and now there is nothing, absolutely nothing, except the
two of them in the dark.” But this largesse demands repayment; and
one of those characters will later themselves tumble into a mire. “He
is a few feet away, buried up to his chest,” McMullan writes. “The
ground is up to his neck, one arm already below the waterline, the
other outstretched … his mouth disappears below the earth.” It is
perhaps too simplistic to suggest that the brute calculus which rules
the villagers’ lives—a leg for lustiness, a chest of drawers for
greed—is mimicked in their environment. But certainly the dull
concussions of ecological catastrophe which reverberate in Last Good
Man suggest the debts humanity owes nature are being called in. Note
that it is “his mouth” which is last to drown. In a book in which
language is so charged, it is significant that this muddy gargling is
the most chilling sound we hear.
But words also hold
weight. McMullan pushes the carrying capacity of language—both in
his own high-wire descriptions, and in the various registers of
writing encountered in Last Good Man. He is an enthusiastic foot
soldier in Martin Amis’s war against cliché. Hot pies cannot
simply bake in the oven; they must “purr in their new life”.
Occasionally, this mania for originality forces some comic
contortions. Those piping pastries have been retrieved from the oven
and “all three men sit in silence with hot pies on porcelain
plates, as if conducting some strange séance”. But, more often,
these experiments triumph. Commonplace occurrences are seen anew:
limed with strangeness and wonder.
She closes her eyes
and listens to the thunder roll through the moorland. She thinks
about how many aches there are amongst the storm clouds. The rain
falling over the tor, the wind and the rumble, all of them foreign
languages. A thousand tongues wagging.
Gossip, rumour,
incomprehension—these are the stuff of nature as well as human
interaction. There is an authentic freshness here which, again,
recalls McCarthy. In both writers’ work, we perceive dimly a great
and terrible space which encompasses the brief flicker of human
lives: an outer darkness that admits no light and baffles
comprehension.
Not that the
characters need much help generating chaos. The village is built on a
shadowy edifice of half-truths and outright lies. The wall is the
most public example of this mayhem. But writing is used to hoard
knowledge and preserve power as well. Maisie, the daughter of Hale’s
neighbour, scribbles compulsively in a diary.
‘It’s clever to
keep a diary,’ Peck says, hovering closer to the girl … Another
step, but as if he crossed some invisible threshold. Maisie’s
attention is provoked and she turns with a swipe of the eyes. ‘It’s
private,’ she slices in a small but adamant voice.
Her secrecy has a
more sinister twin in the record keeping of Brian Goss, the village’s
oleaginous headman. Goss politely ducks the label of leader; yet the
“fabled records” of the community’s accounts give him an
unspoken authority, ill-defined but unshakeable. Peck reflects: “This
administrator, this minister will not have his name stamped on the
judgements that he sets on his way. Perhaps it is cowardice. No doubt
it is cleverness, to stand one step below the chopping block.” The
first writing system, cuneiform, was developed by Sumerian scribes
nearly 5,000 years’ ago; even after civilisation’s collapse,
McMullan notes, it is civil servants who will inherit the earth.
The wall, Goss says,
makes the world a “place that can be understood”. Yet this
legibility eludes the reader; like Peck, we leave the book—and the
village—no wiser than we arrived. A disquieting vagueness lingers
long after McMullan’s riddling novel is done. “Sometimes it can
be hard to know up from down. It can be impossible to make out the
edges.” Here, at the end of all things, words are no help at all. -
Alex Diggins
https://www.3ammagazine.com/3am/words-words-words/
The air is rich
enough to turn stones to men and men to stone. Careful not to step on
anything that will make a noise, Peck edges towards the sound of
heavy breathing, towards the black mark that becomes a body in the
bog.
Duncan Peck watches
as a group of men and women in hooded raincoats pull a man from the
bog, bind him, and cart him away in a wheelbarrow. Leading the group
is James Hale, the boy his mother had taken in, the ‘cousin’ he
had grown up with and grown to love; the man who had crept way from
the house in the night, leaving him alone in the crumbling city where
food was running out and danger was everywhere.
Hale had finally
written to him, inviting him to join him in a remote and isolated
village on Dartmoor. Now, Peck stays hidden from the rain-coated
group but in the fading light he follows their faint tracks across
the bog-strewn moorland. The first sign he sees of the village is a
wall ‘the size of a large barn’. As he gets closer, he sees that
it stands alone and there are papers and posters stuck to it. Some
have simple community messages and requests, but at the top of the
wall are posters scrawled in red paint and in capital letters:
GEOFF SHARPE
DOESN’T CUT THE MEAT GOOD. I SAW GEOFF SHARPE STEALING SLIVERS.
NOBODY LIKES GEOFF SHARP. I HOPE GEOFF SHARPE DIES.
Peck is nervous, not
knowing what to expect in this strange place, and not knowing how his
‘cousin’ will react to his sudden, unannounced arrival. Having
secretly watched Hale and another man through an uncurtained window,
he enters Hale’s home with a revolver cocked. Hale welcomes him and
introduces him to his neighbour, Peter, who confiscates the gun,
telling Peck that guns are banned in this village. This gun, however,
will eventually cause much damage.
The tension McMullan
builds in these opening pages is sustained throughout the book.
Partly, it is fuelled by Peck’s own uncertainties as a stranger in
a close community that has developed its own system of control and
justice. He questions the influence of the wall, where anonymous
people write their opinions and make accusations. And he is disturbed
by the sorts of ‘atonement’ those deemed transgressors of the
community’s values must make. These include being exposed to public
ridicule in the stocks; carrying heavy pieces of furniture roped to
their backs; or having a limb deliberately broken. He and Hale also
share a past trauma linked to the death of Peck’s mother, and this
is gradually revealed as Peck recalls their boyhood.
Hale, Peck learns,
has become leader of the ‘chasers’, who bring back those who run
away from justice. Hale decides the atonement and administers the
blows to break a limb if he deems this necessary. He is a powerful
man in the village, but Peck, as an outsider, sees the way this
village functions, sees the way gossip and ill-feeling can distort
the truth, and sees the usual human flaws hidden and revealed. The
village seems well-established, but:
After enthusing
about the apple trees and the barley fields, the school and the pub,
there are questions about the wall, the stage and scaffold in the
middle of the green, the furniture carried about. Hale does his best
to listen to Peck’s misgivings. ‘It keeps the peace’ he
assures.
Hale’s neighbour,
Peter, is an awkward, ineffectual man, who is a poor workman and
makes a joke of his own clumsiness. He has alienated people, and
someone writes terrible (false) accusations about him on the wall.
When Peter panics and runs away, Hale and his ‘chasers’ go after
him, and Peck is persuaded to go with them. This precipitates a
dramatic chain of events which link Hale, Peck, Peter, Peter’s wife
Charlotte and their young daughter, Maisie. The system of law and
order in the village is compromised and Peck’s own ideas of change
for the good are tested.
Charlotte and Maisie
are interesting characters, and Charlotte’s thoughts and emotions
are threaded through the pages. When she, too, runs away, her
experiences on the moors offer a different view of the way in which
the community works.
Thomas McMullan
tells a dramatic story and he tells it well. He conveys the mixed
emotions of his characters with empathy and handles violence plainly
and, sometimes, with surprising poetic imagery. Occasionally his
imagery becomes strange – ‘the night sits with its knees under
its chin’; ‘the candles are lonely’ – but this poetic flair
brings village life and the Dartmoor landscape to life.
Underlying the
story, but never obtrusive, is an exploration of the way in which
people communicate with each other and how group opinions influence
truth and justice – something that is currently very relevant.
In a ‘Note from
the Author’ which accompanied my proof copy (and which I expect
will be incorporated in the final book) McMullan describes how the
book began after he had encountered an old wall plastered with papers
in a room in a Chinese university where the photocopying machines
were kept. When the words were translated for him by a Chinese
friend, he learned that they were ‘crude, hateful, often sexual
slurs about named people’ – ‘a vile type of graffiti’. He
learned, too, that these public writings had been part of Chinese
culture since imperial times but were best known now for their use
during the Cultural Revolution. This wall represented a ‘violent
tradition’ being continued.
McMullan’s own
assessment of The Last Good Man rings true:
Truth, language
and identity are at the heart of this book, but this is ultimately a
story about people holding themselves together, living with grief,
contending with ideas of goodness. - Ann Skea
https://newtownreviewofbooks.com.au/thomas-mcmullen-the-last-good-man-reviewed-by-ann-skea/
On Dartmoor there is
a surprising place to find – a cashless, barter-led cooperative of
a village, where nobody spends anything, but everyone works and puts
the fruits of their labours out there for free. It’s not all
happy-go-lucky, however, as Duncan Peck, our way to explore this
place, comes to discover. The village is overlooked by a huge
free-standing stump of a wall, and beyond the parish notices about
what is available, and what events are when, it often gets filled in
with potentially libellous, gossippy accusations. In this village,
where small transgressions result in the guilty being forced to walk
around all day with heavy furniture strapped to their back so they
can barely sit, and where the stocks are always ready for use, enough
malevolent comment on the wall can force you to flee, out to risk
your luck in the boggy wasteland beyond the village. The retribution
against anyone criminal enough to escape and be caught is great –
but what might happen if the claims are too close to the bone for
Peck’s cousin, and others in positions of power?
This was an
enjoyable read, and one that sent the mind quite reeling. Reeling, in
my experience at least, for comparisons. It had some of the
pre-Victorian, non-industrialised world perhaps of The Crucible or
The Scarlet Letter – the book goes a long way whilst hiding quite
when this is, only showing that we’re in a world where the city
Peck has left is a much worse place, and the village is now running
low on teabags. It clearly could be said to be a metaphor for the
kind of flaming comments and slander seen on another wall – that on
Facebook, and this definitely has parallels with social media. But
something about everything here – the tone, the style, and the
characters trying to get the best out of justice, also made me think
of the Three Billboards movie.
It must be noted
that none of that prevents this book from being its own entity, and
nothing this rich and surprising would ever be happy to act as a
clear metaphor for just one thing and leave it at that. This could be
said to look at any society where the search for truth and justice is
carried out less forensically than needed, and where one anonymous,
bad word is allowed to hold sway. It also makes us think – not that
this here is exactly an eye for an eye – what kind of punishment
our criminals should serve. All this and a strong page-turning
quality, in a debut novel, shows great promise from a creator
previously known, apparently, for plays. This has hard themes and
events that are never glamorised or treated poorly, so it can tend to
being a little too dark for some potential readers, but nobody should
be put off considering this earthy, gripping piece. The Last Good Man
is, ultimately, a serious and seriously good book. - John Lloyd
https://nbmagazine.co.uk/the-last-good-man-by-thomas-mcmullan/
Thomas McMullen: How a Chinese wall
of shame inspired my novel
https://www.heraldscotland.com/news/18930828.thomas-mcmullan-chinese-wall-shame-inspired-novel/
Interview: Thomas McMullan, Author Of The Last Good Man
https://yorkshiretimes.co.uk/article/Interview-Thomas-McMullan-Author-of-The-Last-Good-Man